We had to remember to keep the script short so that the opening's duration would not be longer than two minutes, so I removed the protagonist's dialogue and the fighting parts, replacing it with the discovery of the jewel theft and the protagonist running out to see who stole it.
Script
Agent O’Connor is pacing up and down the corridor, staying
close to the door, where the jewel is kept, like they are protecting it. They
look tired; they look up at the clock to check the time. Enter the villain,
Alex. First shot shows them slowly walking towards where Agent O’Connor
is pacing. They are slightly crouched down, trying to hide themselves from
O’Connor.
Alex throws a tennis ball across the floor, in front of
O’Connor, to try and get their attention. O’Connor sees the ball roll across
the floor in front of them. They immediately look around to see where it came
from, a confused look on their face as they search the room for answers.
Agent O’Connor moves away from the door, and slowly goes
after the tennis ball, to inspect it and get a better look. They turn a corner
as they walk away, we can see them reaching down to pick up the ball. As they
are doing so, the villain makes a move for it; they head towards the room where
the jewel is kept.
Alex opens the door slowly, and looks around before
entering at a slightly quicker pace. Alex moves towards the object, a pleased
look on their face, showing how happy they are, as they have the jewel in their
reach, literally. Alex puts down their bat, and reaches and takes the jewel and
in a hurried manner, puts it into their bag.
As they are zipping up their bag, they pause; they hear a
noise from outside the door. Alex turns around to see what’s going on. The
camera cuts back to the spy and we see Agent O’Connor getting up after they
have picked up the tennis ball and heading back towards the door, with the ball
in their hand.
O’Connor notices that the door has been left slightly open,
and, again with a confused expression on their face, they go inside to try and
investigate. They walk into the room only to notice that the jewel is missing,
from where they had left it. They have a shocked expression on their face.
Whilst O’Connor has their back to the villain, Alex sneaks
past behind him fast. But as they leave, O’Connor notices something moving
behind them so they turn around to see a glimpse of someone running away.
O’Connor then quickly runs out after them. We see mid-shots
of the Agents feet as they run out of the door.
End of scene one
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